It was a cold winter night in Northern California. The house was in a quiet area, just outside the main suburbs. Streetlights were rare, making the nights very dark, especially when clouds covered the moon. This darkness usually made the little house feel cozy. But that night, something felt off.
Arriving home from work, the air carried a strange smell: cigarette smoke. I hadn't noticed it before. No one was around, so I shook it off and went inside, tired from overtime. It was still early, but I decided a shower and bed would be best.
A Noise in the Dark
Later, a noise woke me up. I thought it might be my friend, who had a spare key and sometimes stopped by after work. He usually texted first, though, and I hadn't heard my phone.
I reached for my phone. The screen lit up, blindingly bright in the dark. Back then, phones didn't have auto-dimming. This one was so bright it could work as a flashlight. It was 9 something. I couldn't tell if I had any new messages.
I put the phone down and called out my friend's name. Silence. Then, heavy footsteps pounded through the downstairs. I jumped out of bed and ran to the closet.
The Chase Upstairs
By the time I opened my bedroom door, the intruder was already coming upstairs. The upstairs had three rooms: my bedroom, a spare room, and a bathroom at the end of the hall. Both bedroom doors were closed. The bathroom door was slightly open.
He ran past my door and into the bathroom. That gave me just enough time. I quickly opened the attic access in my closet ceiling and pulled myself up.
My feet had barely cleared the opening when he ran out of the bathroom. He burst into my bedroom right after I got into the attic. I heard him enter the room and stop. Not finding me, he went back into the hallway and into the spare room. That room was just filled with boxes and some weights. I guess he thought anyone hiding would be in the bedroom. He ran back into my room and turned on the light. A moment later, he ripped open my closet door.
Hidden in the Dark
I was crouched in the attic, just a foot from the opening. I could stop him if he tried to climb up. All I could see was his legs from the knees down. He wore dirty blue jeans and worn work boots.
After looking in the closet for a few seconds, he moved away. I heard a loud crash from my room, followed by a scream of anger and frustration. That scream was the scariest part. It reminded me of my stepfather, who used to scream like that when he lost his temper. He had serious mental health issues and was violent.